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Riiiiiight here!

I'm excited to announce that the longtime horror experimental poetry project of mine, BLACK WIDOW, has been published as an eBook! It's out on Amazon for pre-orders now; the book will officially be released February 1. If you'd like to help support a struggling college student, I've included the link above; it's selling for $4.99 currently. Thank you for your continued support. :heart:

If you haven't read the series, find a preview here:

Black Widow IIaway
i'm going to break away
drain
      i'm
     in
    the
    drain
     of
      drains
       and
        slowly
         being
          spun
           downwards
          and
         downwards
        and
       downwards
      and
       down
          wards.
thirteen
Mom's rose garden grew beneath the steps, and I did too. They weren't aligned and it bothered me. I always tried to fight it but she would come down and lay her hand on my bare skin and whisper, "They aren't growing."
And I would be red like the roses and blue like the violets.
She grew beneath the steps too.
past
notlookingforthepastorthe f u t u r e   e       e       e          e              e
set
set down the lighter
put it down.
don't make it brighter.
I set the roses on fire.
ingenuity
she never knew I     them on fire.
              I set them on fire.
her hands on my bare skin and whisper,
they          aren't           growing
rose

Hey everyone! I'd like to introduce a project a friend and myself are working on: an action-adventure/fantasy comic series titled BASE!!!

BASE!!! is an upcoming comic series regarding a group of Powered individuals and their lives in their world. Said individuals reside in the BASE and fight to stop the Powered that use their abilities for evil.

Influenced by pop art, Japanese manga/anime, and modern cartoons such as Steven Universe and Teen Titans, BASE!!! is written and illustrated by college kids and hopes to be both progressive and action-packed while still paying homage to the comic genre.

Coming in early 2017.

Link to FB page: BASE!!!: The Series

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1ST PLACE
hunters of artemisia//anthologythe city.
The city is a ruin.
girls parade, boys want to be saved
devastation and self-destruction
is the current religion.
On the outskirts, beyond
barbed wire fences
are the Hunters of Artemisia.
their hearts are herb gardens
but their smiles are like thornbush roses
beautiful and sharp, sharp, SHARP
no adults dare set foot
      in the city
      in the outskirts
no adults
          dare.
it's a city of teenagers,
 rebellion,
    escape,
         breakdowns
and love that rarely ever lasts.
it's the city of adolescence.

replicas
mirrors
  carbon copies
laser printers
  copycats.
      reflections.
clones.
the city is as untamed
 as the wilderness around it
we are the Hunters,
  and this we know.
the city dreams escape
 wants to break out of itself
   wants
       
   

hunters of artemisia//anthology
by a-girl-named-divine 

2ND PLACE
The Town that Angered Sky. (anthology)I. a church with no God.
a dark outline of an
ancient steeple reaching skyward
against the night sky,
an outstretched needle
wishing to prick
the clouds and unleash the floods
within. yet, it does
not rain.
it is silent, both outside
and in with lines of uniformed
pews that once held
crowds of residents dressed
in tight-fitting, stiff-to-the-touch
Sunday best. now they
are empty, even the preacher-man
has abandoned the comfort
he once found here.
the walls themselves seem to hold
an atmosphere of wildness to
them, almost as though whatever
dead God once resided here is
angry. almost as though He is
the one who cursed this
untameable place, this jungle
and in doing so,
doomed all the beasts within it.
II. lion-king.
he has inherited this
broken kingdom,
this wretched land
that comes with a
crown of thorns -
the beasts have pledged
themselves to
follow him. each a
desperate face that
knows they are bound
to this ill-fated
patch of earth that
didn't know it wasn't
supposed t

The Town that Angered Sky. (anthology)
by XSwan-SongX

3RD PLACE
The Town That Angered Sky (16 Poem Anthology)Tick Tock, Tick Tock, Dong
28-2-16
The Town that Angered Sky
Is a place time’s forgotten it could ever reach.
The clock atop the tower stands at six and rests at twelve;
An old man made mad by constant questions;
A master tricksman hypnotising all
With his pendulum’s rhythmic dance.
The bats beat the bells in the belfry
With wings wound round cogs and gears,
But time sits in the corner refusing to come out and play;
“This old man, he has none, can’t keep time with bells or drums.”
Time forgets its purpose in the Town that Angered Sky,
As residents meander melancholy through crosshatched streets;
From drink to drink, from drink to dust,
From dust to grave;
Where Mr Time sits atop the steeple tricking you into believing
That you have another moment here to endure.
The bats beat with wooden wings upon the head of their master Time:
“This old man, he once had cause, can’t keep up ‘cos now he’s lost.”
The Town that An

The Town That Angered Sky (16 Poem Anthology)
by MagicalJoey

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Happy birthday, sweetness. :heart:
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Happy birthday! :tighthug: :heart: :iconrainbowcakeplz: I hope you're having a wonderful day!!! :squee: :happybounce:
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Happy Birthday and all the best to you, Aerode :)
Have a great and good NewYear as well :heart:
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