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i want to drive pulses

into your fractured ribcage,

make my words resonate

in your hollow vessels;

heavy enough to sink even

the sturdiest of ships.

(and we both know you can't float.)

but inject me into your

choking streams, and i'll gladly show

you the meaning of 'alone'.
Almost there. Enjoy. :eyes:
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neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Mmmm, so raw.
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Aerode Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :la:
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So much violence.... O.o
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Aerode Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:XD: That was not the intent. But thank you for reading!
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I see.... You're welcome.
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Edges-to-Everything Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
I have read this four times, and the only thing it lets me feel right now is that I can't float either.

I wonder what that is supposed to mean to me. I find myself once again minding the wires that mark the gaps between solitude and loneliness, between anger and forgiveness.
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Aerode Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle: If you ever need to talk, I'm here. Thank you for reading.
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Edges-to-Everything Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
Thanks, I'll remember that. I extend the same to you. :huggle:



 
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Aerode Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: Thank you.
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this broke my soul.

and it's wonderful.
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Aerode Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: Thank you, I'm glad it had some effect on you.

Have you been faring better lately?
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
it certainly did.

uhh.  i don't really know how to answer that ^^;  but don't worry about me, worry about yourself.
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Aerode Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: Stay safe.
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug: you too
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empty-lungs Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
wahh this is beautiful it might be bc i'm ill anyway but this makes me want to cry aw man
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Aerode Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle: I hope you recover quickly. Thank you so much.
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