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i want to drive pulses

into your fractured ribcage,

make my words resonate

in your hollow vessels;

heavy enough to sink even

the sturdiest of ships.

(and we both know you can't float.)

but inject me into your

choking streams, and i'll gladly show

you the meaning of 'alone'.
Almost there. Enjoy. :eyes:
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:iconneonsquiggle:
neonsquiggle Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Mmmm, so raw.
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Aerode Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :la:
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WeirdAndLovely Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So much violence.... O.o
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Aerode Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:XD: That was not the intent. But thank you for reading!
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WeirdAndLovely Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I see.... You're welcome.
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Edges-to-Everything Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I have read this four times, and the only thing it lets me feel right now is that I can't float either.

I wonder what that is supposed to mean to me. I find myself once again minding the wires that mark the gaps between solitude and loneliness, between anger and forgiveness.
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Aerode Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle: If you ever need to talk, I'm here. Thank you for reading.
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Edges-to-Everything Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, I'll remember that. I extend the same to you. :huggle:



 
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Aerode Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: Thank you.
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this broke my soul.

and it's wonderful.
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